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|IELTS Writing 2 - adapting to the climate crisis rather than trying to prevent it from happening
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - May 21, 2020 / RomanKoch - May 21, 2020
|It is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research
3 - I can see your biggiest mistake is you didn't identify which noun is countable, which noun is uncountable. These...
Writing Feedbackmaivuquynh123 - May 21, 2020 / Smile12_12 - May 22, 2020
|These days, it is true that parents do not spend much time on their children
2 - Excellent work on the reasoning paragraphs. The dual topic presentation was well presented. It used good transition methods from...
Writing Feedbackthuhabk - May 21, 2020 / Holt - May 21, 2020
|Leisure is a growing industry
2 - Your restatement is still unclear. It is confusing and you are not properly assessing the original discussion requirements. ...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 20, 2020 / Holt - May 21, 2020
|Ielts Writing task 2: the cause and influences of traveling
2 - The essay was going strong until you took a misstep in the second reasoning paragraph. That is the part...
Writing FeedbackKhanguyent - May 20, 2020 / Holt - May 20, 2020
|Writing task 2 - Discuss the view and give the opinion of dangerous sports
2 - In your reasoning paragraphs, you cannot start the second presentation with "I argue" because you have yet to present...
Writing FeedbackSmile12_12 - May 20, 2020 / Holt - May 20, 2020
|Less international travel in the future.
2 - I will not score this essay on the individual scoring considerations because it will automatically fail in the TA...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 19, 2020 / Holt - May 20, 2020
|Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private
3 - Your essay is not so clear. I think you need to use Firstly, secondly instead of First, Second....
Writing Feedbacklinhkhanh99 - May 19, 2020 / Namangarg147 - May 21, 2020
|Teaching national literature and history vs. world literature and history
2 - This is an extent essay. So the format for the discussion should be in a degree that supports the...
Writing FeedbackHoa Thanh Nguyen - May 19, 2020 / Holt - May 19, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Nowadays, soft drinks are consumed at an alarming rate.
Writing Feedbackvotuankiet96 - May 19, 2020 / Hardy_tom - May 26, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 1: Lifespan of salmon
4 - I think you should illustrate both stages individually. You should've explained lifecycle differently and salmon size differently and please...
Writing Feedbacknhiduong2001 - May 19, 2020 / Hardy_tom - May 26, 2020
|Money is the best option when choosing a career, do you agree or disagree?
Writing FeedbackNgocHai - May 19, 2020 / NgocHai - May 20, 2020
|Nowadays, the number of plants and animals is decreasing. What are the reasons and some solutions?
Writing FeedbackThu Nguyet - May 18, 2020 / Thu Nguyet - May 29, 2020
|How many marriages and divorces took place in the UK, in the period of 25 years
3 - @Holt Thank you a lot for helpful advices to my essay, i really appreciate it. Can this essay get...
Writing Feedbackhance9x - May 18, 2020 / hance9x - May 19, 2020
|How to write an essay in TOEIC : You prefer working in the small or large company?
Writing Feedbacksunny989 - May 18, 2020 / sunny989 - May 21, 2020
|Task 1 - Line Graph indicates the average yearly money spent on mobile phones and stationary phone
5 - You could have done individually comparison like in one para you could have gave information about cellphone and in...
Writing FeedbackSam Sam Nguyen - May 18, 2020 / kamal_kour - May 27, 2020
|advantage and disadvantage essay - With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books.
2 - The maximum paragraph requirement of the task 2 essay is 5. You are over by 1 paragraph because you...
Writing FeedbackmywritingsTT - May 18, 2020 / Holt - May 18, 2020
|Compare and contrast essay: The culture of small towns and cities
2 - Your essay is very good because your brilliant ideas and vocabularies used in the essay. however, you made some...
Writing FeedbackTynna - May 18, 2020 / khanhvnntc - May 19, 2020
|You have just spend a week with a friend for holiday. You realised you had left your wallet there.
2 - Spelling Errors: Fedex ( Proper Noun) - FedEx noddle = noodle Vocabulary Errors: Wonderfully / wonderful -...
Writing Feedbackjarodshen - May 18, 2020 / Holt - May 18, 2020
|Do you like watching films at home or in the cinema? Why
7 - I wondering if the expression 'being freedom of myself' is correct. 'having freedom of myself' might be better? ...
Writing Feedbacklamkhanh - May 18, 2020 / Riley L - May 27, 2020
|Governments should impose heavy tax on car drivers and make improvements to public transportation
3 - I cannot deny that you have a rich lexical resource which contributes the best to rising your band score....
Writing Feedbackmarkus97 - May 17, 2020 / mywritingsTT - May 18, 2020
|The chart illustrates changes in the figure for electricity generated by three different sources
3 - You should write 1 or 2 more sentence in your overview, I think yours is short and not enough...
Writing Feedbackpha - May 17, 2020 / nhiduong2001 - May 21, 2020
|Living in the urban areas may cause many awful effects on citizens' health and I am aware of it
Writing FeedbackLinh TTran - May 17, 2020 / nhiduong2001 - May 21, 2020
|Advertisements have appeared ubiquitously in today's daily life
Writing FeedbackLe Thuy Vy - May 17, 2020 / Le Thuy Vy - May 18, 2020
|The issue of communicating using the second language in foreign countries
4 - The essay will most definitely get a score of 1. The overall discussion format is incorrect. There is no...
Writing FeedbackKhai - May 17, 2020 / Holt - May 18, 2020
|With the growing world population, there's the problem of feeding such a large number of people
3 - thanks for the feedback holt. i have one more query. in the questions "to what extent.." or "do you...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 17, 2020 / GATE - May 19, 2020
|Today parents spend little free time with their children. Why is it the case ? Who are more affected
3 - The facts that you mentioned in the essay are not strong enough to describe the disadvantages.You should provide more...
Writing Feedbackhhoaianhh2905 - May 17, 2020 / Lunn Htar Moe - May 20, 2020
|Society should make efforts to save endangered species if humans affected
5 - @Holt Thank you so much for your response. I will definitely work on my content and post it again...
Writing FeedbackNamangarg147 - May 17, 2020 / Namangarg147 - May 17, 2020
|Writing Task 1 - The figure for marriages and divorces in the UK over a period of 25 years
5 - Grammatical mistakes . It can be easily to seen is not a correct statement should have been replaced by...
Writing Feedbackpha - May 17, 2020 / Hardy_tom - May 26, 2020
|From the chart: Australians in terms of physical activity they partook in on a regular basis in 2010
Writing FeedbackLaurel Pham - May 16, 2020 / Laurel Pham - May 16, 2020
|Tourism except benefits can also pose several problems
4 - My apologies. The vocabulary explanation for a different post was accidentally attached to your essay. No worries though. You...
Writing Feedbackvlnga - May 16, 2020 / Holt - May 16, 2020
|Writing task 2 - Education is free. Do you agree or disagree?
2 - There are actually 2 discussion prompts based on your discussion topic. Since you did not provide the original prompt,...
Writing FeedbackTrinh Phon Tinh - May 16, 2020 / Holt - May 16, 2020
|The advantages and disadvantages of living in the modern world
4 - I will not mention the grammar error anymore because you already have the feedback. Here, I would like to...
Writing Feedbackphx - May 16, 2020 / Lunn Htar Moe - May 20, 2020
|The line graph illustrates the number of people aged 65 and more - over 100 years period
2 - The summary overview is complete in content. However, the presentation will not help your GRA score as you did...
Writing Feedbacknhuquinhh - May 16, 2020 / Holt - May 16, 2020
|Children watch a lot of TV and play video games - writing task 2(IELTS)
2 - The TA score for this essay will be 1. Your answer was completely unrelated to the task. You did...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 15, 2020 / Holt - May 16, 2020
|Writing task 2 - IELTS Academic - economic growth as the only way to end hunger and poverty?
3 - Thank you so much for your comments. They've helped me a lot in figuring out how I should write...
Writing Feedbackhangvu248 - May 15, 2020 / hangvu248 - May 15, 2020
|The graph illustrates the fish, lamb, beef and chicken consumptions in an European country
3 - I think the organization of paragraphs should be considered more carefully, as Holt has suggested. I would also recommend...
Writing FeedbackSally 205 - May 15, 2020 / hangvu248 - May 15, 2020
|IELTS- T2: Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished?
Writing FeedbackMinhthuy1993 - May 15, 2020 / huyjunnie - May 16, 2020
|I trust my government to take care of my life and climate change
NEW - Climate change is a big problem Government can not be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility...
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|Psychologists and color schemes
2 - Your summation of the original prompt needs more work. You did not use synonyms for the terms offices and...
Writing Feedbackkhoa1102 - May 14, 2020 / Holt - May 15, 2020
|IELTS 9 wiriting task 1 : maps of an island before and after constructed
2 - I cannot properly review this essay because of 2 reasons: - You did not provide the images for...
Writing Feedbackholymolly - May 14, 2020 / Holt - May 14, 2020
|IELTS2 - governments, companies and people have equal responsibilities for combating global warming
Writing Feedbackylc125 - May 14, 2020 / ylc125 - May 14, 2020
|Building more sports facilities as the efficient way to promote public health. Any other measures?
Writing Feedbackafzalmd - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|Internet against Public Libraries
2 - This is an almost excellent essay that should score above the simple passing band score. In my opinion, this...
Writing Feedbackgekani - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|The importance of art, music and drama especially at primary level
2 - Being a simple agree or disagree essay, you do not need to offer an emotional or measured response to...
Writing Feedbackfrulymuly - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|Environmental issues around the world are so severe that an individual cannot make a difference
2 - The overall discussion is sound. It is applicable to the given prompt requirement except, you offered solutions to the...
Writing Feedbackngochathanh - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|The problems and solutions of education in undeveloped countries
2 - Your paragraphs do not truly discuss the related problems within a paragraph. Neither do you present related solutions in...
Writing FeedbackPee_Tee - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|Minimizing or deafiting climate change
2 - While you did a wonderful job in responding to the prompt question and staying on point with your reasoning...
Writing Feedbackphhth - May 12, 2020 / Holt - May 12, 2020
|The issue as to whether some types of food advertisements should be prohibited remains controversial
2 - Before you start writing essays that are extremely worded, you should first make sure that you are responding to...
Writing Feedbackphoebenguyen - May 12, 2020 / Holt - May 12, 2020
|IELTS T2: The best way for government to solve traffic congestion is provding free public transport?
2 - The essay asked you to deliver an extent or measured agreement or disagreement with the given topic. Based on...
Writing Feedbackuyenton - May 12, 2020 / Holt - May 12, 2020
|The total of books read by gender at the library of Starmouth School from 2009 to the present
2 - Due to the lack of image accompanying your essay, I will be unable to review your essay for content...
Writing FeedbackKl17122004 - May 11, 2020 / Holt - May 11, 2020
|More people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families.
2 - I am afraid to review this essay for prompt responsiveness because there are 2 task 2 essay prompts that...
Writing Feedbacknnminhnhu02 - May 11, 2020 / Holt - May 11, 2020
|Is technology useful for education in the modern time?
4 - Since Holt has already commented extensively on your content, I'll just add a few feedback on major writing style...
Writing Feedbackrosa1310 - May 11, 2020 / anhnguyenhai333 - May 11, 2020
|Color of goods and sales - Essay - IELTS_Writing task 2
3 - The examiner will be lost when he reads your essay. You did not paraphrase the original topic, nor did...
Writing FeedbackLy Na - May 11, 2020 / Holt - May 11, 2020
|WRITING TOEIC PART 3: Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is important to work at a job
Writing Feedbackphgchi2102 - May 10, 2020 / anhnguyenhai333 - May 10, 2020
|The massive number of parents are choosing to educate their children at home recent years
2 - I am confused by your presentation. Are you writing a research paper or a task 2 IELTS practice test?...
Writing Feedbackthomsuna123 - May 10, 2020 / Holt - May 10, 2020
|British people to spend time on phone calls - Writing Task 1 - Bar chart
3 - @Chaunguyen As the contributor said you did not indicate the measurement type, if you did you would have noticed...
Writing FeedbackChaunguyen - May 10, 2020 / RomanKoch - May 10, 2020
|Some people think cooking at home is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with?
2 - Your essay does not apparently follow the prompt discussion requirements. It omits the specific discussion topics as indicated from...
Writing FeedbackSONNOZ13 - May 10, 2020 / Holt - May 10, 2020
|Essay Task 2 about the advantages and disadvantages of social media
4 - You are being asked to compare the advantages and disadvantages in the essay. The proper approach to this, if...
Writing Feedbackbach - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 10, 2020
|Discuss about sports professionals have more income than other professions
4 - The essay has 2 prompt deviations. The first is in the paraphrased statement where you offered a solution to...
Writing FeedbackDang Minh - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 10, 2020
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