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|Staying in one location has benefits, but it will not outshine the merits of living in many areas
6 - Therefore, I would argue that even though living in one location gives benefitbenefits , it will not outshine the...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Apr 7, 2015 / mohjawahir - Apr 8, 2015
|Merits and Demerits of Nomadic Lifestyle
Writing FeedbackStacy Handayani - Apr 7, 2015 / mohjawahir - Apr 8, 2015
|Ethic and doing business internationally
2 - Japanese business executive rarely says "no", they tend to take a long discussion until their colleagues realize that the...
Writing FeedbackMuhammadImho - Apr 8, 2015 / mohjawahir - Apr 8, 2015
|Staying in one place and living in different area.
4 - Basically, people want to live in the most comfortable zone.This beginning is somehow bizarre. Remember the more informative your...
Writing Feedbackintiaiqbal92 - Apr 8, 2015 / Vns9x - Apr 8, 2015
|Once people grew up in one place, now it is changing. Staying in one place or moving around oftenly?
3 - Hi cwang, your writing is excellent, but I have some suggest for your writing. ... staying in the...
Writing Feedbackririchwang - Apr 7, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Apr 8, 2015
|Should children be educated during their free time?
2 - Hii, Auntum_waltz, I have several discussion and suggestion for your writing, I hope these can help you. ...
Writing Feedbackautumn_waltz - Apr 8, 2015 / fadlanmuzakki - Apr 8, 2015
|Parents should control children's behaviour at their early stage. To what extent do you agree or not
2 - Hi Wenlai, your essay is brilliant but I found several grammatical errors and some repetition words. I think you...
Writing Feedbackwenlai - Apr 8, 2015 / intiaiqbal92 - Apr 8, 2015
|How to behave in doing business internationally? An example - saying "No" in different cultures.
NEW - Many internationally business ethics discussions going on that believe how to behave in doing business are the central point....
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|Nowadays, advanced buildings adorn many places in a country.
3 - Because of this, some people believe that these towering buildings have special attractions for cities and towns as those...
Writing Feedbackirhame - Apr 7, 2015 / ririchwang - Apr 7, 2015
|People's lives are more preferable nowadays than a century ago?
4 - Please note that studies related to 'global warming' have recently changed so if you quote a source from 2012...
Writing Feedbackshintacandrade - Apr 7, 2015 / EF_Stacey - Apr 7, 2015
|There are more opportunities today to buy a book. We can get each one even without leaving our home.
3 - Thank you very much for the advice and assistance.I will deploy and make it better. Thank you again....
Writing FeedbackKwang - Apr 7, 2015 / Kwang - Apr 7, 2015
|Nowadays the big cities are endeavoring to provide their inhabitants with more magnificent buildings
3 - You need to explain why/how different kinds of buildings would be environment friendly/unfriendly....
Writing Feedbackintiaiqbal92 - Apr 7, 2015 / Rich Monte - Apr 7, 2015
|Observing children copy the watched parents - IELTS Sample Essay
3 - It should be stressed that parents, not adults, are responsible for their children. Humans are not a herd of...
Writing FeedbackmMaftuna - Apr 7, 2015 / Rich Monte - Apr 7, 2015
|Ielts: mix of both - competition and cooperation should be taught to the student
Writing Feedbackzeref - Apr 7, 2015 / zeref - Apr 7, 2015
|Over-grazing of agricultural land was the main cause of its degradation in the nineteen nineties.
Writing FeedbackBambusaMX - Apr 7, 2015 / ransom2092 - Apr 7, 2015
|Trending of high class building
2 - Sentence 1) Change imposing to styles .Sentence 2) It is construction, not contraction. You construct a building. Sentence 3)...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Apr 7, 2015 / ransom2092 - Apr 7, 2015
|Horse Therapy for People with Limitations
2 - You have very good writing. Please read your paper again so you can see how the changes help. ...
Writing FeedbackStamas - Apr 5, 2015 / lcturn87 - Apr 7, 2015
|Now it is almost impossible to avoid the influence of the media on our lives
2 - I don't speak English perfect, but my honest opinion is very positive. Truly say, that is very interesting and...
Writing FeedbackWindachan - Apr 7, 2015 / Varlamow - Apr 7, 2015
|Volkswagen Passat - the car description
NEW - Volkswagen Passat Today, I am going to introduce the new car, that was made in our company Volkswagen....
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|The past, 100 years ago, was a discovery era, and this time significantly influenced our life today
2 - Hi winda, your writing is good but I have few comment, In recent years, namely modern lifestyle, is...
Writing FeedbackWindachan - Apr 7, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Apr 7, 2015
|Nuclear technology is an inexpensive and unpolluted power source; energy at a relative low cost
Writing Feedbackhoney21 - Apr 5, 2015 / honey21 - Apr 7, 2015
|Developing public transportation or making a new type of car? What should be goverment's priority?
Writing Feedbackfarhan110991 - Apr 6, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Apr 7, 2015
|Sophisticated technology and better telecommunication makes people's life more comfortable today
2 - Nowadays, life has becomebeen better than it was onein a century ago. WhileAs such, some people argue that the...
Writing FeedbackMuhammadImho - Apr 7, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Apr 7, 2015
|Life now is better than it was 100 year ago. Agree or disagree?
3 - Over the last century, people's lives are better than before. While some people think that life, now, has brought...
Writing FeedbackFirda Umairoh - Apr 7, 2015 / EF_Carol - Apr 7, 2015
|People can learn more about another country just by watching than visiting it. how true is this?
3 - Haii iqbal.. there're several gramatical issues : understanding about other countries through movies or television broadcast =...
Writing Feedbackririchwang - Apr 7, 2015 / BambusaMX - Apr 7, 2015
|Can living in the same location make people close to their family and friends? Isn't that boring?
2 - On the other hand, now, some others really like stayingnowadays, some others believe that staying in several different places...
Writing Feedbackirhame - Apr 7, 2015 / Faisal_Aceh - Apr 7, 2015
|In today's world the high class buildings become a landmark for each town and city.
2 - As such, several people argue that havehaving an impressive buildings around the city and town are becoming variety and...
Writing Feedbackthutyedaniel - Apr 7, 2015 / Stacy Handayani - Apr 7, 2015
|The current phenomenon of purchasing books online
3 - Nowadays, the life is busier. This sentence is too short! Nowadays, the life is busier and more bustling in...
Writing Feedbackkulina - Apr 6, 2015 / Vns9x - Apr 7, 2015
|Some people say that modern buildings are ugly and are ruining our towns and cities
3 - ... able to attract most tourists so as that it increases a high standard life of citizens, and ......
Writing Feedbackmohjawahir - Apr 7, 2015 / ririchwang - Apr 7, 2015
|The bad effects of deforestation on the environment
5 - First of all, deforestation is the causebetter than you use the predominant reason of the global warming. We...
Writing FeedbackMiastasia - Apr 4, 2015 / thutyedaniel - Apr 7, 2015
|Local culture and visitors from other countries - should they obey cultural customs?
2 - Traveling abroad has beenbecomingbecome one of the most popular activitiesforamong people worldwide in the last fewrecent decades. For this...
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Apr 5, 2015 / ah_zafari - Apr 7, 2015
|Human is responsible for the global warming and governments should fix this problem any way possible
NEW - Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today what are the causes...
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|Getting a book nowadays becomed an easy task. It's enough to buy it online, being at home.
2 - You should've written that even our everyday routine can be simplified by technology progress. And then present online...
Writing Feedbackppcrm - Apr 5, 2015 / milamiller - Apr 6, 2015
|Some green-heart people might oppose the factory, since it can bring some damage.
NEW - A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and...
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|I have many plans for the future but my greatest goal is to be an English teacher.
Writing Feedbacklinhmonnn - Apr 4, 2015 / lcturn87 - Apr 5, 2015
|Opinion Essay : Online shopping for books is increasingly popular - it's more convenient
NEW - Hello everybody, I'm Whale. Sorry for my poor English because English is my second language so I have difficulty...
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|Nowadays internet courses are more and more popular - how it impact on the traditional education?
NEW - Hi, everybody I would be appreciated anyone helps me to correct and revise my essay. These days...
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|The merits outweigh demerits of living in small community and in small village (IELTS Task 2)
2 - Living in a pretty village is more favorite for many people in the past(why?). However, in this day and...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Apr 3, 2015 / Vns9x - Apr 4, 2015
|We can name some drawbacks of modern communication, but it still won't outshine its benefits
2 - Your opening paragraph could improve by identifying the problem in a clearer way. For instance in your first...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Apr 4, 2015 / JoshN - Apr 4, 2015
|Is the criminality among youngsters caused by the lack of the social and emotional learning?
2 - A few words should be omitted so as to present succinct introduction More attention should be paid on how...
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Apr 3, 2015 / eddies - Apr 3, 2015
|Young officials recruited from prestigious colleges are needed to be a part of the government
4 - Beware to break down your prompt. I am afraid that the essential about younger people are not suitable for...
Writing FeedbackPrasanthkasturi - Apr 3, 2015 / SHanafi - Apr 3, 2015
|The percentage of degrees granted in at the National University in 1990, 2000 and 2010
Writing Feedbackshintacandrade - Apr 3, 2015 / mlk1987 - Apr 3, 2015
|People are hypnotized by advertising to buy goods which they even really don't need
2 - Not too long ago advertising was not nearly as popular as at the moment. - Consider taking this sentence...
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Apr 3, 2015 / mlk1987 - Apr 3, 2015
|As global trade increases, many goods are produced in other countries, transported long distances.
2 - Buying in China is, in fact, buying American. The phenomenon of notable companies which tend to outsource their...
Writing Feedbackmohjawahir - Apr 1, 2015 / SHanafi - Apr 2, 2015
|Saving earth from enviromental damages caused by over using air to support exporting (IELTS Task 2)
3 - The Guardian reports,in 2014, that coffee take distributive advantage around 34% and 26 % of Ethiopia and Burundi...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Apr 1, 2015 / SHanafi - Apr 2, 2015
|Friendship essay; As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend
4 - What's the definition of friends? As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend, In addition, friends...
Writing Feedbackjenny0103 - Apr 1, 2015 / EF_Carol - Apr 2, 2015
|Improving skills to get into an undergraduate program.
3 - And last but not less important, ( Third) they talk abou the composition of the bones, where ... (This...
Writing Feedbackmonisol - Mar 30, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Apr 1, 2015
|Mobile Phone's Market Share; BenQ fell significantly from 4.9% in 2005 to 2.4% in 2006
2 - Corrections have been marked in bold, Additions in italics and Omissions in strike. The table gives information about...
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Apr 1, 2015 / abhayarathore - Apr 1, 2015
|Persuasive essay on the negatives of excessive technology use
2 - The first sentence is an uninteresting statement of the obvious, so the reader might stop paying attention. It might...
Writing Feedbacknatashanicola - Mar 30, 2015 / EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2015
|Medical Side of Bud - "Can marijuana become medical?"
2 - As many states begin to accept marijuana for recreational use, others are noticing the power it has in healing....
Writing Feedbackjackie828 - Mar 28, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Apr 1, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences
2 - Hi Anfalia, These are several suggestions for your writing, Crime is an issue that deserves public attention....
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Apr 1, 2015 / mumtazdinar - Apr 1, 2015
|Some learners need a structured course from high qualified teacher to know materials in a depth.
2 - One's success(Success in what?) determines on how(what do you mean by how?.) people are studying. For this reason(this sentence...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 31, 2015 / ah_zafari - Mar 31, 2015
|To look after the elderly - responsibility of families or the government?
3 - There is a lot of discussion on how to look after elderly people. While some people suggest that the...
Writing Feedbackautumn_waltz - Mar 27, 2015 / ah_zafari - Mar 31, 2015
|Once people experience puberty they are potentially be able to produce children.
2 - Once people experience puberty they are potentially be able to produce children However, the body condition that allows...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Mar 27, 2015 / autumn_waltz - Mar 31, 2015
|One of the most intensely debated topics in education is the types of subjects need to be studied
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Mar 27, 2015 / ah_zafari - Mar 30, 2015
|The question is if countries should cooperate with other countries instead of isolating themselves
Writing Feedbacksandrinka - Mar 28, 2015 / sandrinka - Mar 30, 2015
|A fear of censure in Indian society; our conversation often turns to criticizing what we see lacking
2 - Hi Rajiv.. I'd want to simplify this part: ... that we should have taken instead from their, that...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 28, 2015 / EF_Kevin - Mar 28, 2015
|'the history, tradition and way of life will vanish as well' - An essay on language extinction
Writing FeedbackYanxu - Mar 26, 2015 / autumn_waltz - Mar 27, 2015
|Students from the age of 16 should be encouraged to have a part time job
2 - Hello! My edits and suggestions are below, Financial issues are most of the time the reasons why...
Writing FeedbackIkrame - Mar 26, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 26, 2015
|Advertisements lead people to spend money lavishly without further thinking. Ads effects on people.
3 - Hi Tia, thank you for you correction on my writing. I have proofread my writing several times but I...
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