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|International effort has been taking the lead in guiding the space developments on the right track
3 - aloha Thin Doung, here are my thoughts: These days we(you'd better avoid pronoun we, he, she, on your...
Writing Feedbackshin_crayon - Sep 13, 2016 / bung ilham - Sep 13, 2016
|IELTS Task 2: Politicians are more responsible for protection of the environment
2 - Hi Aravindia.. Welcome to Essay Forum. You have been a right medium to improve your essay. Let me help...
Writing Feedbackaravindia - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 13, 2016
|Japan and Malaysia in 2010 - Average household spendings by major categories; IELTS TASK 1
2 - Hi Fahad, I have read through your essay. The following are some suggestions for you, hope you can follow...
Writing FeedbackEric2750230 - Aug 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 12, 2016
|IELTS academic task 1 - Destination of UK graduate and postgraduate students.
2 - Your questions: 1. There is some variety in prompts for these questions, but although this is one...
Writing FeedbackTest_Taker15 - Sep 12, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 12, 2016
|In the educational system of Japan, individual work has always had a higher value when learning
2 - Hello Yuya, welcome to the EssayForum. We aim to give constructive feedbacks to all people with their writing. I...
Writing FeedbackYuyahhhh - Sep 10, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - Sep 12, 2016
|The best way to improve health is to exercise regularly. To what extent do you agree?
Writing Feedbacksangtt04 - Sep 11, 2016 / heliosmusic - Sep 12, 2016
|A wind turbine component design and it's position on the an area
3 - "A wind turbine component design and it's position on the an area" S/B "... and its position" ...
Writing Feedbackaidafitria18 - Sep 5, 2016 / ProfessorVerb - Sep 12, 2016
|Today urban sprawl is considered to pose serious problems; giving the opinion - IELTS Writing Task 2
Writing FeedbackDmitryB - Sep 11, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 11, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 Reasons Why Land Degradation Happen And 3 Regions Which Are Affected
4 - Hello, Faridadwi18! Over-cultivation IS only 2 per cent lower than THE deforestation. Another ways of describing figures:...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Sep 3, 2016 / DmitryB - Sep 11, 2016
|Summary: Forget shopping. Soon you'll download your new clothes
2 - Hi, Eka. I've paraphrased a few sentences and made some grammatical corrections wherever possible. I hope this helps you....
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 10, 2016 / Test_Taker15 - Sep 10, 2016
|In this modern era, we are unknowingly using products which create a lot of useless material
4 - i would like to focus on your introduction paragraph Today the most serious problem is ... in...
Writing FeedbackMayank7g - Sep 8, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 10, 2016
|Statistics of coffee and bananas consumption some years ago in Eurrope
Writing FeedbackTest_Taker15 - Sep 9, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 9, 2016
|A leader should become an open-minded person rather than having strong opinions
Writing Feedbackchichi - Sep 9, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 9, 2016
|Making decisions without hesitation always bring a better choice - TOEFL Independent Essay
2 - it always make wrong decide because of they usually hesitate and scare their decision is wrong. =>i really sorry...
Writing Feedbacklilylin26262 - Sep 9, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 9, 2016
|Underground railway system along with inception, kilometers covered and passengers traveled per year
2 - Hi Kripke, welcome to EF team! :) I would like to directly point out your weaknesses in order...
Writing FeedbackTest_Taker15 - Sep 9, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 9, 2016
|In this consumer driven economy, owning redundant possessions is a commonly practiced custom
7 - Hi Mehbub, we appreciate you words of acknowledging our work here on EF, we definitely aim at providing you...
Writing Feedbackmehbub - Aug 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 9, 2016
|The government should use the money invested in arts to spent in public services
5 - Arts are the mainly way to express the culture and the history moment of a society: i thinsk this...
Writing FeedbackBrunasingh - Sep 8, 2016 / lyy1994 - Sep 9, 2016
|[IELTS Writing Task1- letter] The cafeteria is planned for closure
4 - Hi Zhou, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, below are my thoughts on your letter. First of all,...
Writing Feedbackkenchowcn - Sep 9, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 9, 2016
|A wonderfull place of Inca's custom in Peru
3 - Hi Patta, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope you find this website to be helpful and even...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 9, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 9, 2016
|Learner's interest and enjoyment should be the ultimate factors while enrolling to further education
Writing Feedbackmehbub - Sep 9, 2016 / mehbub - Sep 9, 2016
|WT 2: Discuss Both Views: Some people say that the clothes people wear are the most important
Writing Feedbackmehbub - Sep 9, 2016 / kenchowcn - Sep 9, 2016
|A summary : Why ordinary people need to understand power
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 9, 2016
|The diagrams present a wind turbine section model and the best position to get maximal electricity.
4 - Hi Sony, below are additional help for your analysis. - and its preferred stance position. - The main...
Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Sep 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 8, 2016
|The foremost reason of unhealthy eating in today's world is the hectic life
3 - Hi Hector, indeed, this essay is a good read, well first of all it has a very interesting prompt....
Writing Feedbacksinahector - Sep 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 8, 2016
|You have just arrived in a new city where you are studying English - write letter to a friend
3 - Hi Dipa, Apart from the above-mentioned feedback that focus on grammatical range and accuracy. I would like to...
Writing FeedbackDipa19 - Sep 6, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 8, 2016
|Formal Education for 4 Years Old Children - is it too soon?
3 - Hi Daya. I am delighted to read your writing because you have shown better progress than previous terms. I...
Writing Feedbackdaya93 - Sep 5, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 8, 2016
|In 1962, there was a limited public transport in the surveyed villages.
2 - Hi Riandi. I have read this closely. These are my vantage points about your writing. Please, meet my notes...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 6, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 8, 2016
|People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by..(GRE)
3 - Hi Stephanie, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, I hope you find this website to be...
Writing Feedbackrlagusdk - Sep 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 7, 2016
|People today are more and more inclined to utilise electronic media in their social life.
5 - Hi there, I really like your essay it was on track, you described how internet or social can impact...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Sep 5, 2016 / Lexusnguyen1995 - Sep 7, 2016
|The increasing numbers of tourism sector have probably a negative effect for local people
2 - Hi ondemande. I have read your essay closely. In this moment, I only focus on contents of yours because...
Writing Feedbackondemande20 - Sep 6, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 7, 2016
|Write a letter to the manager of the football club - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 GENERAL TRAINING
Writing FeedbackDipa19 - Sep 6, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 6, 2016
|Corporation have to check if their products are harmful for the environment- not focus on money only
Writing Feedbackondemande20 - Sep 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 6, 2016
|How good worker relationships based on survey conducted in 2005 and 2009
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 6, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 6, 2016
|The evolution of infrastructure projects in the Meadowside area
3 - Hi Maulida, for future analysis, don't forget to post the map or the graph that came with the the...
Writing Feedbackmaulida07 - Sep 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 6, 2016
|How it is made - The Cement and concrete for building purposes.
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Sep 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 6, 2016
|In 1962, Meadowside Village and Fonton were just two separated, quiet and small places.
Writing Feedbacktyindriani36 - Sep 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 6, 2016
|I can't see any negative impact of technology for people - everything depends on community attitude.
NEW - The use of electoric media has a negative effect on personal relationships between people. To what extent do...
Writing Feedbackondemande20 - Sep 6, 2016 / — -
|IELTS Task 2 Clothes Can Indicates What People Personality Or Not?
2 - Hi Farida, below are additional thoughts on your essay. A few suggestions that will hopefully enhance your essay. ...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Sep 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 6, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 Relationship Between People In A Workplace
2 - Hello, Farida :) ... 61 per cent outnumbering good by 3525 per cent. Pay more attention in analyzing...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Sep 6, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Sep 6, 2016
|In the midst of globalization, electronic devices are irreplaceable, although they still may harm us
2 - Good night Hailun, your essay need more letters because you only read 238 words in this well-developed...
Writing Feedbackhailun11 - Sep 6, 2016 / wahyu - Sep 6, 2016
|IELTS practice for task 1 about maps of Meadowside village and Foton
Writing FeedbackHeru22 - Sep 6, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Sep 6, 2016
|Several leisure activities among children - IELTS Task 1
Writing Feedbackwahyu - Sep 6, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Sep 6, 2016
|Equal number of male and female students is a bad idea - it brings only limitations and obstacles
Writing Feedbackwahyu - Sep 6, 2016 / hailun11 - Sep 6, 2016
|New hotel, station, and business park has built in the area of Meadowside and Fonton
3 - Hay fitria, your understanding tenses is good, may i give you may suggestion in some parts of your essay...
Writing Feedbackaidafitria18 - Sep 6, 2016 / wahyu - Sep 6, 2016
|The process of heat released and energy used in a house related to air circulation system installed
2 - Hi Eka. These is my perspective about your writing. Actually, you have demonstrated your expert in the...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 5, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 6, 2016
|The Development of Meadowside village and Fonton in three different time periods
2 - hi Naoki here are my suggetions: The map illustrates the development that have occurred in Meadowside village and...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Sep 6, 2016 / maulida07 - Sep 6, 2016
|Men and women are different in the way they behave and are treated
3 - whats app Dmitry your essay is better than before, i have a suggestion to your introduction paragraph. you...
Writing FeedbackDmitryB - Sep 5, 2016 / wahyu - Sep 6, 2016
|IELTS TASK: Describing Process Diagram of wind turbine work system
2 - What app bro Hary01, your essay is going to be beter, i have suggestions to your introduction. you...
Writing FeedbackHary01 - Sep 5, 2016 / wahyu - Sep 6, 2016
|Ielts Writing Task 2. Some people believe children are given too much free time. feel this time..
2 - it is good that you composed your introduction into a succinct paragraph. However,i could not get the the...
Writing FeedbackMayank7g - Sep 5, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 6, 2016
|THE PRINCIPLE OF A WIND TURBINE IN GENERATING ELECTRICITY
2 - Hi Yusuf. These are my thoughts for your writing Actually, this is a good overview. However, it's...
Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Sep 5, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 6, 2016
|United States as the big contributor of carbon emission on earth.
2 - Hi Miss. These below are my thoughts to finalize this summary This made from ITS REASON IS BECAUSE...
Writing Feedbackhailun11 - Sep 5, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 5, 2016
|PTE Writing: Computer Technology - we cannot do anything without the help of electronics
2 - ... we cannot do anything without the help offacilitated by computer technology. For several reasons, which I will...
Writing Feedbackaero_stress - Sep 5, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 5, 2016
|The beautiful skin color of human
2 - Hikuma, a few corrections for your thread :) The speaker was born in the very various ... [Alternative:...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Sep 5, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Sep 5, 2016
|Invest more resources in young people
5 - Young generation has a saya role in the destiny of a nation. While Iothers agree that they (...) uncertainly...
Writing Feedbackngohuytu_kaka - Sep 5, 2016 / hirani03 - Sep 5, 2016
|As a result of sport's popularity, the young generation tend to admire famous athletes
3 - aero_stress: Firstly, I think that I used the word "The young" correctly because it means "young people". 2. "had...
Writing Feedbackflvflv - Sep 5, 2016 / flvflv - Sep 5, 2016
|Style is an attribute which has become a distinctive for sustainability.
2 - Hi Hailun, I think your essay apparently out of topic. The question is purposed to cover whether (I...
Writing Feedbackhailun11 - Sep 4, 2016 / daya93 - Sep 5, 2016
|Summary 'how we unearthed the spinosaurus'
2 - Hi Fadhila, Here is my general feedback to your writing. Be careful with pronoun. Focus who is the...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Sep 5, 2016 / Yusuf05 - Sep 5, 2016
|Reasons to start a business. Entrepreneurs concentrate only on making money - IELTS Task 2
2 - Hi, roommate! Your introduction is quite captivating, you only should add a thesis statement to make clear in...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Sep 5, 2016 / daya93 - Sep 5, 2016
|The mechanism of wind turbine in generating electricity and several possible location of this system
2 - Hi Naoki, I'm glad to read your writing. Yet allow me to address some suggestion to your wiriting....
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Sep 5, 2016 / Yusuf05 - Sep 5, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 : The diagrams show the design for a wind turbine and its location.
2 - hi! i hope it will be helpful The figures presents a wind turbine ... Although it is buildbuilt...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 5, 2016 / azmi23 - Sep 5, 2016
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