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IELTS Task 1 : The Number of Library Books Read by Boys and Girls at Starmouth School

2 - Hi Atikah. These are my corrections I agree with the suggestion of Reza. You should make introduction more...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 19, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 20, 2016
Number of Books in Library Which Is Read by Different Gender

2 - Hi Hikuma.. These are my corrections. ... about A number of books READ BY GIRLS AND BOYS in A...

Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 19, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 20, 2016
"FIVE". What does five mean to you? 250 words or less

2 - Hi Kate, welcome to EssayForum :) If I'm not mistaken, I have read similar thread to this one....

Writing Feedbackkateporter - Aug 19, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 20, 2016
Energy waste in a house is caused by many electrical installations and also windows

2 - Hi Hikmatyar. These are my corrections. ... energy and loss the heat that (THE OMITTING METHOD) caused by...

Writing Feedbacktyar32 - Aug 20, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 20, 2016
IELTS Task 1: In general, wind turbine has many components that have different function

2 - Hi Tyar, here's my contribution towards your essay. I hope you can follow through. - The diagrams show...

Writing Feedbacktyar32 - Aug 20, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 20, 2016
Having a job that you love doing make you happier - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

2 - Hi Eka, here's my analysis towards your essay, especially in grammatical range and accuracy part. 1st paragraph: -...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 19, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 20, 2016
Can people be happy only if they have a passionate job?

2 - Hi hirani03 I have some suggestions for you. I hope it will help you to develop your writing skill....

Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 19, 2016 / tyar32 - Aug 20, 2016
IELTS Task 2 Talent show : Best way to find Talented People Or Just Entertainment?

4 - Many people enjoyto watching talent shows and that is the reason why it has becomes more popular right now....

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016 / RAY93 - Aug 20, 2016
The talent show is one of shows that get many enthusiasm of spectators.

3 - Television programs in this day have become more varied. ... but in my view, talent shows has most influenced...

Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 18, 2016 / RAY93 - Aug 20, 2016
The advantages of nuclear family - living with grandparents or without them

2 - Hi Anh Khoa These are my corrections for your small story. Now in society we know many kinds...

Writing Feedbackanhkhoa1819 - Aug 19, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 20, 2016
The elusive demographic bonus - boon or bust?

2 - Hi Yusuf. These are my corrections to develop your summary better. the future boomingpopulution POPULATION? What sort of...

Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 19, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 20, 2016
Indonesia marks Independence Day by sinking illegal ships

4 - Hi Azmi, as soon as I read the title of your essay, I can't help but notice how innovative...

Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
IELTS Task 2 : People can Only be Happy if They Have a Job They Really Enjoy

3 - Hi Atikah, below are additional help for your essay; - The purpose of working is to make -...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
Writing essay - Television advertising brings considerable problems for children

2 - Hi Reza, below are my thoughts on your essay; - In edition( did you mean "addition to ")...

Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
Toefl: Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms.

4 - Hello, these are some corrections for your writing. :) In some high school,policiesThe policy for all students to...

Writing Feedbackdhani - Aug 19, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 19, 2016
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Agreement or Disagreement of Saving Money Rather Than Paying Tax

4 - Hi Faiza, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to be...

Writing FeedbackFaizatin Nadya R - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
IELTS Task 2 Make A Hobby Become A Job

3 - Hi Farida, below are my thoughts on your essay. - Many people maketurn their hobbies - become theirinto...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
Controversy Land Reclamation in Jakarta

5 - Hallo hary, I left the comment in here. I hope it will useful for you. Now dayNowadays ,...

Writing FeedbackHary01 - Aug 16, 2016 / Permata992 - Aug 19, 2016
Discuss The Effects of Unplanned Urban Expansion

4 - hii, here is my correction ;) grownig >> growing umempoyment >> unemployment accommadation >> accommodation however, absoulutely...

Writing Feedbackeminhaqi - Jul 17, 2016 / bbcheesecake14 - Aug 19, 2016
TOEFL Independent Task - Should children be allowed to have smartphones.

5 - Hi Tung! may I correct your summary? are good are bad to children. => or Using...

Writing Feedbacktung2011 - Aug 18, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 19, 2016
e-Commerce of Retail Sectors in Canada - IELTS Task 1

2 - Hallo dina, i am really happy left a comment in here, i hope it will useful for you.. ...

Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 19, 2016 / Permata992 - Aug 19, 2016
Task 1 Trends of Reader Boys And Girls in Starmouth School

2 - Hallo farida, i will give you several feedbacks. I hope that it will useful for you to make a...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 19, 2016 / Permata992 - Aug 19, 2016
Writing----should TV advertising directed towards young children be allowed?

2 - Hi Lansium, - The speaker put forward a firm statement that that no advertising (...) age ranging from...

Writing FeedbackLansium - Aug 19, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 19, 2016
It is irrefutable that there's a difference between living in a small town and in a large city

3 - hi.. This is true in certain in some ways,whereas in other ways,it is similarly. it shoul be better...

Writing Feedbacktuyetanh134 - Aug 18, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 19, 2016
GRE Argument Essay : Accepting government funding for Grandview Symphony

4 - hii, here is my correction for your essay ;) before establishing the neccesitynecessity profile guest musciancsmusician s to...

Writing Feedbackcod3r - Jul 18, 2016 / bbcheesecake14 - Aug 19, 2016
Education in India: Are students failing or the system?

2 - Hello Eka, here some suggestions for you : - Sonam Wangchuk, is an engineer, he went to Ladakh...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 19, 2016 / dinafayna04 - Aug 19, 2016
TED talks: My underwater robot for ocean exploration.

4 - HI Koba, - They use ROV (remote operated vehicle) robots to record video in the deep of the...

Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 18, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 19, 2016
Recently, a wide range of television talent programs become renowned in general community.

2 - hi miss sofi i found that you have problems with noun phrase a rigorous selection process succeed a...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 18, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 19, 2016
Why More People Than Ever Are Donating Their Bodies to Science

4 - hai hary this some suggestions from me : Recently, donating the body after deathdeath body to science...

Writing FeedbackHary01 - Aug 18, 2016 / Riandi31 - Aug 19, 2016
TED : How tress talk each other

3 - Hi , maybe i'd like to give a try to give some suggestion. Suzanne has investigated forest for...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 18, 2016 / azmi23 - Aug 19, 2016
Technology in education: Disadvantages (people rely too much on computers)

2 - Hi Siti, the detailed descriptions below are my remarks toward your essay development. I hope you can follow through...

Writing Feedbackonji09 - Aug 19, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
Emissions if Cows Keep Cutting the Cheese?

2 - Hi Eka, here's my analysis towards your essay. 1st paragraph: - Amount of methane come from respiration and...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 19, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
The percentage of individuals holding on science categories in Malaysia and Singapore

3 - Let me rewrite the introduction ... A breakdown of the the number of people who are holding science...

Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 19, 2016 / RezaAnandatama17 - Aug 19, 2016
History of the Circus (Summarize)

2 - Hello I applied some stylistic adjustments to your text so that it sounds better: There has [...]...

Writing Feedbackzul2805_es - Aug 19, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 19, 2016
Racial Inequality in U.K. Is Getting Worse, Report Finds

2 - Hi Azmi, I would like to go straightforward to check and give my best feedback in this article summary....

Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 18, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
The breakdown of the number of dwellers who are elderly people in Great Britain (1985-2035)

2 - Hi Reza, here's my analysis towards your essay. 1st paragraph: - TheA breakdown of the information about the...

Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 18, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
Time Summary: Russia and Iran Fly Across a Key Threshold in the Middle East

3 - Hello Sony. I am very keen on reading your summary. This has been free of the major errors grammatically....

Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
"8 Beauty Products Safe to Share" - Summary Article

2 - Hi Hikuma. I have seen your writing. Actually, you show the better result for the writing skill. You are...

Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
Summary TED's : art make unusual stuff

4 - HI Adi.. this is one of the good summaries because I get the information clearly. However, I am going...

Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
Several televised talent shows have their own purpose to reach. IELTS WRITING TASK 2

2 - Hi Eka Lamar Syari ! here are my severa suggestion In my view, only a few of those...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 18, 2016 / jomul01 - Aug 18, 2016
Exhibiting ability in front of television becomed popular among citizens all around the world

2 - Hi Atikah, below are thoughts on your essay, I hope the corrections will enhance your essay and be ready...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
The Proportion of Population Aged 65 and over in the United Kingdom - IELTS Task 1

2 - Hi. you wrote writing task 1 IELTS properly, however,I have some advice to enhance you score... here...

Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 18, 2016 / andika_soppeng - Aug 18, 2016
The benefit of safety in driving

5 - Hi Celestine, - Safe driving is very important for prevention ... Safety drive very important to prevent an...

Writing FeedbackCelestine - Aug 2, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016
At the present time, the televised talent show are famous programs in many countries.

2 - Hi, fadhilah ! here are several my suggestions Television show needs more interesting program to entertain every person.(in...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / jomul01 - Aug 18, 2016
Summary an Article Best Trails to People Who Do Not Like Hiking

2 - Hi Farida. I appreciate your effort because you wanna provide your time to improve your English. Let me give...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
Science Qualification in Malaysia and Singapore - IELTS Task 1

3 - Hi Dina, - The bar graph informs the qualifications of people ... The bar graph shows the number...

Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 18, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016
SUMMARY : How Netted Birds Can Actually Help Conservation

3 - Hi Sofi, below are my thoughts and enhancements on your summary. - elaborates relating to how netted birds...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions

4 - Hi Ilham, Let me help you to make an introductory paragraph, The bar graph illustrates data on people...

Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 18, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016
Nowadays, information and communication technology are really important in education

3 - Hi Cheese! facilitate the to study => I'm sorry, I can't understand the meaning of this phrase. :(...

Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 18, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 18, 2016
IELTS TASK 2- Write an essay on environment conservation and challenges.

3 - hiii smith i love your summary, here some suggestion for you to strengthen your summary... In the recent Paris...

Writing Feedbacktwid - Aug 18, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 18, 2016
The Panama Pepers exposed a huge global problem

4 - Many(you can use other words such as a wide range of, a plenty of, etc ) rich and powerful...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 17, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 18, 2016
How to improve photography skills on your phone

2 - dear @bbcheesecake14, here are some corrections for your essay. let me start from the first paragraph, i think...

Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 18, 2016 / riaerizal11 - Aug 18, 2016
The road was by far the most popular of four means of transport; delivery goods by pipeline was rare

4 - Hi Jenlisa, below are additional suggestions to enhance your analysis. First of all, when writing, don't forget the minor...

Writing Feedbackjenlisa - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
IELTS TASK 2 - More and more works is done by the machines.

2 - Hi Rere, upon reviewing the essay, I must say is is written comprehensively thorough, it has all the necessary...

Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
Is it an appropriate way to learn foreign language by children at an early age, or not?

2 - hi brano, i'll give you some correction for your essay a tendency of receiving informlationinformation thisthese period children...

Writing FeedbackBRANOO - Aug 18, 2016 / bbcheesecake14 - Aug 18, 2016
Most argue that the advance of electronic communication is harmful towards human interpersonal skill

3 - Halo, Miss Ilmi Your Introduction: The way how people interact each other ... Basically, I have another...

Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 18, 2016 / nida26 - Aug 18, 2016
It's debated whether an individual should always tell the truth at any time

4 - Thank you all. Your feedback helps me a lot....

Writing FeedbackLansium - Aug 17, 2016 / Lansium - Aug 18, 2016
TED talk: Non-violence struggle by Jamila Raqiib.

2 - Hi Fadhillah.. Please, you meet these corrections, and those make you sure to be better. in the world....

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
Podcast Summary: Educate The Young Women To Be Brave Than To Be Perfect

2 - This podcast is from Rashma Saujani, 2016 who started their story fromthat based on her true story. she was...

Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 18, 2016 / madmoiselle - Aug 18, 2016
The best way to balance in successful career and happy family life at the same time

3 - Hello. I only find the corrections for this paragraph. Keep writing. ... associated with stressful causecausesimpose focusingimposing focus...

Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Aug 16, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 18, 2016

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